Let me take you now and drink your life
Oh dear god this tastes divine
Yes it's time to make you mine
So dark so alone
So eternal, no need for atone
For those kisses that leave so many speechless
Those kisses so eternally bliss
That warmth, that crimson liquid
Running through my lips
That nectar of life
So rich so thick
Yes you are mine now I will decide
Will you wonder away so I may finish you another day
Or take you now and be on my way
I will add more to this as time passes I am sure
COMMENTS
Nothing better then pure raw emotion to write from. I like it Billy Great job !
I made this one sometime ago, but I just never though about putting it up
you are so mean for writing this! you are hurtful and heartless! i never want to see your stinky face again! ^_^
i liked it...it flowed nicely with a slight touch of anger
...........someone pissed you off.........I would hate to have been them. Where would our great writers and poets be without such women to inspire such things. Well written.
wow, fantastically written!
COMMENTS
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Namu7kyrie333
06:09 Mar 26 2009
liked it very much
darkxmoon
02:24 Jun 15 2010
I love this!